Samstag, 17. November 2007
Chapter 3
sensai games, 16:15h
The demonstration in Burma is in full swings and thousand of people are on the streets to protest against the military regime.
The government tries to break up the revolt and use violence to force their aims.
To hush up the bloody demonstrations the regime blocks the Internet access and there is nearly no way to show the world the brutality of the military.
James took photos of the demonstration and he tries to send the pictures to his agency in London.
But the only Internet access which is working is in a government building and only high generals have an authorisation to enter, so James has to overpower a general to get his uniform. With the clothes and the ID card of the general he gets the possibility to enter the building and send an E-Mail to his office. But when he is connected with the Internet, security forces will see his activities and he has only few minutes to accomplish his mission. The way through the government building is very dangerous and so he has to sneak off to the exit .
The government tries to break up the revolt and use violence to force their aims.
To hush up the bloody demonstrations the regime blocks the Internet access and there is nearly no way to show the world the brutality of the military.
James took photos of the demonstration and he tries to send the pictures to his agency in London.
But the only Internet access which is working is in a government building and only high generals have an authorisation to enter, so James has to overpower a general to get his uniform. With the clothes and the ID card of the general he gets the possibility to enter the building and send an E-Mail to his office. But when he is connected with the Internet, security forces will see his activities and he has only few minutes to accomplish his mission. The way through the government building is very dangerous and so he has to sneak off to the exit .
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maja pivec,
Sonntag, 25. November 2007, 21:04
some more thoughts
your game has a lot of potential, the idea is very interesting. you elaborated well on the story.
you should give some more thoughts in the journalism part and present more clear, how and what the player will learn playing the game (I can imagine, but mainly based on our discussions and some topics my imagination adds) ... you should expand your story line in this direction.
you should give some more thoughts in the journalism part and present more clear, how and what the player will learn playing the game (I can imagine, but mainly based on our discussions and some topics my imagination adds) ... you should expand your story line in this direction.
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